Just finished all three accept route endings! Just.. wow. W o w. Your writing is reaaaaally good. The music is real good as well! I think I remember something about the music being done by you (or at least made for the game), is that true? The music is stellar and hits all the right spots at the right moments!
I really like the vn so much =w= really love the relationship between ted and jeffrey, the ending is very good and very.. well won't say it XD after all i rating this 5/5 stars can't wait for the update X3
Since Caijoru can be in someone's dream and control Ted at the same time, that probably means Jeffrey getting scratched in the reject route wasn't caused by the dream, he just got scratched by Ted.
It should be fixed now. I've replaced the old android download with the new one.
Ended up taking a lot longer than I thought to fix ^^' And unfortunately Ren'py's android emulator isn't that good since it doesn't show the actual screen size.
Anyways, let me know if there are any further issues!
This is an excellent game. The core characters are really well-written and the plot is very engaging. It was a great idea to give Jeffery such a large range of expressions. He really comes across as a fully animated, living character with constantly shifting emotions. Daren is such a great bro.
I was also very impressed by your realistic portrayal of mental illness in a obviously flawed and self-destructive yet lovable main character.
The game is very well made. The music is decent, the characters are fantastic, and the plot is fairly good. The only quall I have with the game is its length. When the Accept route was finished, I was left wondering if that was really the end of the game or if I had just done something I shouldn't have. While it being short isn't necessarily a bad thing, it just felt like this game was setting up way more than it actually offered. Other than that, it's definitely a good VN!
I've been on a (furry) horror/depresso VN binge since finishing Echo and playing through what's available of its prequels and sequels. I'm enjoying this VN so far through the couple of hours I've had with it on the 'Accept' route, it's definitely a much appreciated 'smaller scope' and slower paced VN as well versus some others so far. The music variety and simplicity is enjoyable as well, though I can imagine what some of the themes (especially during more emotional scenes) could sound like with further refinement as development hopefully continues <3
The character portraits for Jeffrey/our silver fox MC are a welcomed addition too, and add character (hah) to their conversations and occasionally flawed (or lack of) thoughts. I feel it helps to make them more understandable / colorful personality for sure, and fill in some of the 'bareness' that other VNs this early on may have. I've only noticed one typo near the start as well, so overall quality of the writing and art is good too and it hasn't taken away from my growing interest and immersion of the story, or scenarios that could play out as I continue
Wow, this is so good! I've played many vn's but the writing and artwork in this one is better than most of them. I love what you're doing and can't wait for what comes next.
Hi! If it's not a problem and if I'm allowed, I want to try to draw a fanart of Jeffrey and Ted for you. '^^ I'm not sure if I can succes though, because I'm a beginner artist. But at least I want to try to say thank you for your hard work. ♡
Is the game still being worked on? Becouse i honestly love it, its a well made game. Im in lovee whit the stories and all its characters it comes along. I can't wait to play it again whit more stuff added to it :)
If y'all don't mind, I'm gonna gawk a bit over this vn. I love it. That's all there is to it but it's harder to express how much I adore this thing through words, but I'm gonna fucking try. The characters are wonderful and memorable, I find it easy to put myself into the story and experience it as if I was there, and I don't even get bored or wish it was more interactive like I do literally with every other vn I've tried. I cannot wait to see what comes next, and Xarishro if your seeing this, thank you, from the bottom of my heart, for coming up with something this god dam good. Let it be known that your work is sincerely appreciated and if there is anything you might need or want help with then let me know, I'd be more than willing to lend some time to help with something if I could. I'll stop gawking now, thank you for coming to my TED talk.
Yes. It was on hiatus earlier in the year due to health-related issues, but at the moment I'm releasing an update every two months. The next update will be next Friday on the 15th.
Huh, that's strange. That didn't used to be there. I guess itch changed what gets displayed at some point and so that defaulted to the first option. I've fixed it now. Thanks for letting me know!
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Amazing VN. I freaking loved it so much. I am so glad I stumbled upon this, and I look forward to future builds.
Thank you ^^
Just finished all three accept route endings! Just.. wow. W o w. Your writing is reaaaaally good. The music is real good as well! I think I remember something about the music being done by you (or at least made for the game), is that true? The music is stellar and hits all the right spots at the right moments!
Not gonna lie I don't even remember there being a NSFW scene in the game
ngl dis vn too good to be read only once, currently on my third time
I really like the vn so much =w=
really love the relationship between ted and jeffrey, the ending is very good and very.. well won't say it XD
after all i rating this 5/5 stars can't wait for the update X3
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Since Caijoru can be in someone's dream and control Ted at the same time, that probably means Jeffrey getting scratched in the reject route wasn't caused by the dream, he just got scratched by Ted.
Hello! I just wanted to say that the game is on an excellent path and each build is getting better and better!
I have a question and I hope you don't mind, But do you plan to release the OST on some platform? I would love to have this soundtrack!
I recently uploaded the OST to youtube since someone suggested it to me. I haven't posted it anywhere else though.
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLb2EFbNBITOzdpuuNS1mpI19YVLbw_pJq
Thank you so much!
Thank you :D
This happens the dialogue is cut off 😥😥
Is this on PC, Android, or Mac? I can look into finding a way to fix it.
Edit: I think I know what's going on. I'ma work on fixing it real quick.
Its on Android, I keep forgetting to mention that. 😅😅😅
It should be fixed now. I've replaced the old android download with the new one.
Ended up taking a lot longer than I thought to fix ^^' And unfortunately Ren'py's android emulator isn't that good since it doesn't show the actual screen size.
Anyways, let me know if there are any further issues!
This is an excellent game. The core characters are really well-written and the plot is very engaging. It was a great idea to give Jeffery such a large range of expressions. He really comes across as a fully animated, living character with constantly shifting emotions. Daren is such a great bro.
I was also very impressed by your realistic portrayal of mental illness in a obviously flawed and self-destructive yet lovable main character.
Thank you ^^
Hey! I was wondering if it's alright to use the music in this game? (Obviously with credit)
What are you wanting to use it for?
Youtube Live Stream Ending Screen, Love the song "A Tired Realization" and figured it would fit nicely.
Yeah, sure ^^
Thanks alot! and thanks for that song, it's amazing :)
The game is very well made. The music is decent, the characters are fantastic, and the plot is fairly good. The only quall I have with the game is its length. When the Accept route was finished, I was left wondering if that was really the end of the game or if I had just done something I shouldn't have. While it being short isn't necessarily a bad thing, it just felt like this game was setting up way more than it actually offered. Other than that, it's definitely a good VN!
Well there's more routes, that might satisfy you more, depending on what you felt was missing. But try this most recently added ending!
Is there any discord aerver?
There is not. Sorry about that.
No but there is a fan server. Wish I could find the invite.
marshal is best <3
I've been on a (furry) horror/depresso VN binge since finishing Echo and playing through what's available of its prequels and sequels. I'm enjoying this VN so far through the couple of hours I've had with it on the 'Accept' route, it's definitely a much appreciated 'smaller scope' and slower paced VN as well versus some others so far. The music variety and simplicity is enjoyable as well, though I can imagine what some of the themes (especially during more emotional scenes) could sound like with further refinement as development hopefully continues <3
The character portraits for Jeffrey/our silver fox MC are a welcomed addition too, and add character (hah) to their conversations and occasionally flawed (or lack of) thoughts. I feel it helps to make them more understandable / colorful personality for sure, and fill in some of the 'bareness' that other VNs this early on may have. I've only noticed one typo near the start as well, so overall quality of the writing and art is good too and it hasn't taken away from my growing interest and immersion of the story, or scenarios that could play out as I continue
I'm using the current PC build on linux, and it's using software rendering which is causing poor performance and occasional graphical glitches.
It's still more than playable so this shouldn't be considered a high priority issue, I just wanted to make sure this is documented.
Aw heck yea an update!
Can't wait to play it later :3
Yay! Update!
Is there a way to help underwrite the cost of this story?
At the moment, no, but that might change in the future!
Hello Xarishro, I hope you're doing well. 🙂🙂🙂
Will there'll be CG scenes on a certain Ted route moment?
In the future, possibly. At the moment, there just hasn't been enough time for my artist to work on it with how much else she has going on.
Wow, this is so good! I've played many vn's but the writing and artwork in this one is better than most of them. I love what you're doing and can't wait for what comes next.
Hi! If it's not a problem and if I'm allowed, I want to try to draw a fanart of Jeffrey and Ted for you. '^^ I'm not sure if I can succes though, because I'm a beginner artist. But at least I want to try to say thank you for your hard work. ♡
Sure, that would be cool to see ^^
It's not as good as you draw, but I tried my best. :D I hope you like it! ♥
Hey, that's awesome :D I showed it to my artist, Sarah, and she likes it too.
Oh, I'm surprised. :D Thank you, I'm happy! <3 (I could make Ted's body a bit shorter though...)
Take all the itme you need, best of wishes.
Is the game still being worked on? Becouse i honestly love it, its a well made game. Im in lovee whit the stories and all its characters it comes along. I can't wait to play it again whit more stuff added to it :)
Also decided to make a fan discord lol so here https://discord.gg/kPXjEM8An6
If y'all don't mind, I'm gonna gawk a bit over this vn. I love it. That's all there is to it but it's harder to express how much I adore this thing through words, but I'm gonna fucking try. The characters are wonderful and memorable, I find it easy to put myself into the story and experience it as if I was there, and I don't even get bored or wish it was more interactive like I do literally with every other vn I've tried. I cannot wait to see what comes next, and Xarishro if your seeing this, thank you, from the bottom of my heart, for coming up with something this god dam good. Let it be known that your work is sincerely appreciated and if there is anything you might need or want help with then let me know, I'd be more than willing to lend some time to help with something if I could. I'll stop gawking now, thank you for coming to my TED talk.
I want Moar!!!!!! The cliffhanger was awful. (Awful as in why!?!? Than bad.) 😃😃😃
Thank you, Xarishiro!
Glad to see that the project still alive.
Greetings from cold Russia:)
Please don't take this the wrong way but, is this VN still alive?
Yes. It was on hiatus earlier in the year due to health-related issues, but at the moment I'm releasing an update every two months. The next update will be next Friday on the 15th.
I follow this visual novel from the 0.04 build and I love it and I hope you will get better with your health
And I think Google is like it too because now actually know what I'm looking for
Just want to say I hope you guys are doing okay.
That's fine :3 I hope you get better QQ
July 15, ah shiiit, it's so faaaaaaaaar 😓
Btw, what happened to your wrist? I'm hope you are doing well and healthy! This story of your is too 'most splendid', i like it so much. ♡
I have repetitive stress injury, so I've been having to let my wrists heal. It's taking a while, but they are slowly getting better!
Yey! I'm was worried about you. :D It still sounds like really really serious, but get better soon!
Anyone got a fan made discord going?
https://discord.gg/kPXjEM8An6
“Average session: a few seconds”
bruh
Huh, that's strange. That didn't used to be there. I guess itch changed what gets displayed at some point and so that defaulted to the first option. I've fixed it now. Thanks for letting me know!
No prob, and thank you for the game, it’s really good!
Epic :0
I want to date Daren, he's my favorite character so far.
Same but I dont want to be alabama
I mean....at this point
LITERALLY
It's a really good story! I do enjoyed! I really curious on the next update. :)
Take your medications kids
I have a question. What is a renpy? I searched the word on the internet dictionary but I can't find any research;;
A VN making program
Oh! It's a making program's name! Thank you for replying
It's an engine to make a vn, not just simply a program's name. :p At this rate i creating too a visual novel.
Well now I'm interested
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